Direct Feedback:
This is where I’ll read and provide feedback on your manuscript pages
Feel confident with the foundation of your story? Ready to move on to the nitty gritty?
We will discuss techniques such as:
- The power of character choice
- Show and tell
- Finding your character’s goal in opening scenes
- Objective and super-objective
- The patterns of dialogue
- The different levels of antagonistic force… And more!
Direct Feedback is:
- Best for those who are confident in the story they are writing and want specific, in-line feedback.
- You can add a zoom call to any option for an additional $30 ($40 Canadian).
Pricing Options:
First chapter + comments: $60 ($80 Canadian)
20 manuscript pages +comments: $120 ($160 Canadian)
30 manuscript pages + comments: $150 ($200 Canadian)
60-80,000 word manuscript evaluation: $1,000 ($1,350 Canadian)
80-100,000 word manuscript evaluation: $1,200 ($1,600 Canadian)
100-120,000 word manuscript evaluation: $1,400 ($1,900 Canadian)
Ready To Power Up With Direct Feedback?
